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I'm working on some animations for an I-Phone game my friends and I are planning on making and hopefully selling for a small profit. I've got the base sprites down fairly well, but currently I'm stuck on some of the attack animations.
Would it be okay if I posted some of the sprites here and maybe get a few pointers as to what I can do?


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It's the art dump. Post first ask questions later.


Wed Jun 20, 2012 3:15 am
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Alright, sure. Here they are, although enlarged.
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I've got the animations for the first character pretty much settled. The second character is supposed to carry a rifle and a pistol, while the third character is supposed to have some type of high-tech japanese sword.
Thing is, not sure how to pull this off. Anyone have any suggestions?


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madmax wrote:
Darn it all, I never catch those perspective errors. Thanks for spotting it.

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It's the top surface of the stock not being 'level' with the top surface of the barrel.

This is common with many rifles, very excessive in Pennsylvania long guns
http://www.muzzleloaderbuilderssupply.c ... rifles.jpg
No I mean, stock looks twisted and bent in comparison to barrel. I know that it's angled.


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Boba_Fett, i'm probably not the most qualified person to say anything, but i'll offer what little insight i might potentially have.
- Clear signs of mirroring here and there, though considering the purpose, that's not too important. Adding a smidge of asymmetry might help a bit.
- Some places appear pillow shaded, likely due to the top-down lighting. Specifically, the girls hair and the top dudes cloak on the side views, and the big samurai dudes chest plate. The front view of the heads also displays this slightly, but not significantly.
- There's a few instances of banding (i.e. "hugging" the outline with the shading). Hard to avoid at that scale, though.
- You're using quite a few colours for shading. That's not necessarily a bad thing, it might just confuse you. I personally go by the rule that says "if you have to zoom in to see it, it's not necessary", but that's a subjective matter.
Looks nice otherwise, good job. c: (also feel free to correct me you pro pixel artists i know that hang around here)

Meanwhile, here's some things i made fairly recently. Spoiler because spatial issues/white backgrounds of burning.



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Shook your art is amazing and you should feel proud


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@ boba_fet: Try to pull what off? If you want to animate, just draw the frames one by one. I'm confused on what you're asking.

Also I like how you're Boba Fet but your avatar is Vile from Megaman X. :3


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Shook, you should work on your color selection, other than that not really a lot of crits.


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What are you talking about shook chooses the best colours.


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Shutup roastveg you're part of a roadblock in shook's way to perfecting his art.


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@ boba_fet: Try to pull what off? If you want to animate, just draw the frames one by one. I'm confused on what you're asking.

Also I like how you're Boba Fet but your avatar is Vile from Megaman X. :3

I'm just having trouble drawing some frames. Arms are excruciatingly difficult for me to sprite for some odd reason, and I'm afraid that the characters will look too stiff when swinging a sword or firing a weapon.

Also, yeah, I did that on purpose. haha


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When firing a gun, the arms should be fairly stiff, because that's how guns should be held. One or two handed firing?
With bends, since you're at such a small scale, you can just make a very stiff boxy square arm, then remove a pixel at each corner and shade/outline appropriately. This is just for 90 degree angles tho.

It all comes down to how you want to pose your dudes. Without more info I'm not sure I can help you much more.


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My pictures on Doodle or Die










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You should label the ones that are NSFW as such.


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You should label the ones that are NSFW as such.

They're spoilered though


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