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 Cortex Command RtD 
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I notice something odd about what the crowd is clustered around then I notice something very familiar in the center, but it requires further observation to identify this odd object


Thu Dec 13, 2012 3:10 am
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Rolling FTW!

Farrem-John dared-2
You begin to push through the crowd, but they just push you back, well that didn't work.


painbringer1998-Joseph Harbinsleigh-2
It is not very easy to see something as strange as that in the crowd, especially when they are crowded around it, maybe you should try again.



Maart3n-Marbo-1
You begin to get around the crowd, too bad some people are in the way, so you proceed to the facepunching, and your hand hurt quite a bit afterwards.


Notsoscary-Cpl Boris-1
You were about to tell people to make room, but someone punches you in the face, that little....


Game Events: Whatever is in the middle is making a faint red light.


Thu Dec 13, 2012 3:24 am
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"Damn it...wait, is it glowing red? Oh...blin
Get the hell out of Tradestar Midas, as because of experience, everything glowing red explodes


Thu Dec 13, 2012 6:54 am
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Notice Boris is running, and when you see a man from MDC running it's bad, I quickly tag along and run with him


Thu Dec 13, 2012 7:13 am
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follow the others, offer future drink to rover I face punched.


Thu Dec 13, 2012 7:56 am
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Well, it is glowing red, but explosives don't glow red nowadays, right? Anyway, proceed where some other people are going.


Fri Dec 14, 2012 12:23 am
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More Rawllage.

Farrem-John dared-3
Okay, run with the group, good idea, not like anything will happen right? What the hell is the group doing?



painbringer1998-Joseph Harbinsleigh-3
Well when a guy that is MDC is running, better haul ass yourself, but why the hell is the group coming to us?!




Maart3n-Marbo-6
Well, maybe I shouldve been a little lighter, Anyway start running with the rest of the group of people, wait a second, you are at the front!



Notsoscary-Cpl Boris-5
Of course, everything glowing red explodes, according to what you have been through, for some reason the group of people look hypnotized as they are walking towards you, no promotion here I guess, oh well, time to run!


Game Events:Everyone is running like crazy towards the nearest ship while the group of people start walking in the groups direction.


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Fri Dec 14, 2012 12:40 am
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Can I join? :D

EDIT:

Woot!

Name: John Smith
Faction: General Industries
Inventory: General Industries' C-4 x3, General Industries' dead man's detonator.
Weapons: FP6 Breaching Shotgun, G17C


So yeah, I'm basically a point man that has C-4 instead of C-2.
Also, I chose a dead man's detonator for two reasons: it can be activated as normally, and in the case that I die ♥♥♥♥ will go boom. :D


By the way, I really want to make all the C-4 explode in a glorious manner, so I'm willing to sacrifice me for the group if it is needed >:D


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Fri Dec 14, 2012 1:36 am
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Dude hell yeah let Asklar join in on this ♥♥♥♥!

Oh and


"Oh ♥♥♥♥" I say because that crowd looks angry, is it accusing us of planting a bomb? I hope nothing bad happens while running next to the MDC guy nothing bad happens, I hope the magical dice of chance doesn't screw me over...


Fri Dec 14, 2012 5:32 am
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"Alright everyone! Calm down! *Shoot to the air* I'm an explosive specialist! Let me check this thing. You, guys over there! *Points at the rest of the group* Get here and help me with this thing. We can't let it blow up!"
>Check the supposed explosive.


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Also, as a small tip, take a look at other RtDs format. Yours is a bit messy and kinda hard to read.


Fri Dec 14, 2012 5:41 am
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(For one asklar this is my first Rtd :P)

look back at the crowd as the man shoots in the air, draw weapon as well.


Fri Dec 14, 2012 5:50 am
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Might be your first, but he's giving constructive criticism, which you should think about. PS, there are grammar errors in your posts yet one of your rules is that we have to use proper English....
help John with the bomb.


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Woah, they sure look angry...
Get to the Shop and buy a Portal Gun, so incase if Asklar fails, he still can get out of TradeStar Midas.


Fri Dec 14, 2012 1:12 pm
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I only said that as an optional :/


Fri Dec 14, 2012 10:24 pm
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Also, as a small tip, take a look at other RtDs format. Yours is a bit messy and kinda hard to read.



I took note of that, I am brushing it up now in the later ones.


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