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Jack The Llama Commando
Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm
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Location: CONTRACTIONS I DONT NEED CONTRACTIONS
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 Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D Describing male reproductive organs makes me feel gay. D:
*gets back to work*
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| Sun Jul 15, 2007 5:22 am |
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Daman
Joined: Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:22 am
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D So uh, KeroroCanti wants to know if there will be any sex scenes rather than just sexy scenes. :V
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| Sun Jul 15, 2007 5:38 am |
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Thanatos
Joined: Sat Jan 06, 2007 3:58 am
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Location: Germany
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D Well don't describe it then. But I really think you could spice up your story if two playful catgirls from next door came in, said that they were too loud, and saw what they were doing, and joined in.
Hm.... 1 guy and 3 girls.... ya, that's about even.
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| Sun Jul 15, 2007 6:18 am |
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Jack The Llama Commando
Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm
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Location: CONTRACTIONS I DONT NEED CONTRACTIONS
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D Daman:Sex scenes are affermative and henshin-a-go-go-baby.
Thanatos:That would be interesting, but it would make the story seem a bit fail. D:
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| Sun Jul 15, 2007 6:29 am |
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Thanatos
Joined: Sat Jan 06, 2007 3:58 am
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D Jacko, how long till finished? The only reason i'm staying up is to read this, so when will it be out? Hurry up, i'm getting sick staying up atm, I need to go to bed to sleep this off, so hurry!
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| Sun Jul 15, 2007 6:37 am |
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Jack The Llama Commando
Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm
Posts: 620
Location: CONTRACTIONS I DONT NEED CONTRACTIONS
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D Oh ♥♥♥♥ dude, I'm sorry. I'm almost done. It's kinda' short, and I'm not exactly proud of it. But its a sexy scene. D:
Done.
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| Sun Jul 15, 2007 6:54 am |
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Thanatos
Joined: Sat Jan 06, 2007 3:58 am
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D Aye... that needs some touching up... And a bit of... style perhaps.... um.... ya....
Well, i'm going to go sleep this headache off. Goodnight everyone.
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Jack The Llama Commando
Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm
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Location: CONTRACTIONS I DONT NEED CONTRACTIONS
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D That's what I said. D: And writing porn stories is a lot different/tougher than writing a regular story. That's still no excuse for my incompetence. I'm going to go weep my agony away. And read some erotica to get pointers. 
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| Sun Jul 15, 2007 7:01 am |
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venn177
Joined: Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:35 am
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Location: Largo, Florida
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D No offense, but you were too nervous and that part was horrible compared to the rest.
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| Sun Jul 15, 2007 7:02 am |
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Thanatos
Joined: Sat Jan 06, 2007 3:58 am
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D rofl... I just got the strangest urge to try and write this in a better version... God, if I do that I will be so ashamed of myself. want me to pm it to you if for some trange reason i write it?
And btw, you need to make the love thing more beleivable. It takes a long time to develop love.
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| Sun Jul 15, 2007 7:06 am |
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venn177
Joined: Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:35 am
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Location: Largo, Florida
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D Thanatos wrote: And btw, you need to make the love thing more beleivable. It takes a long time to develop love. And it seems like the characters are becoming more shallow as the story goes on.
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| Sun Jul 15, 2007 7:07 am |
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Thanatos
Joined: Sat Jan 06, 2007 3:58 am
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Location: Germany
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D And slutty...
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| Sun Jul 15, 2007 7:09 am |
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venn177
Joined: Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:35 am
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Location: Largo, Florida
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D Thanatos wrote: And slutty... Shallow is just a fancy word for slutty...
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p3lb0x
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Joined: Fri Feb 02, 2007 3:53 pm
Posts: 1896
Location: in my little gay bunker
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D Father Venn wrote: Jack The Llama Commando wrote: Thank you Venn, I appreciate that.
But I will (seriously) get it done tonight. Or atleast most of it.
On the other hand, Warhammer is fun. Especially when you don't know half the rules, and are using sandals and pieces of styrofoam as cover. WarHammer is stupid, the only thing good about it was the ps2 game Fire Warrior. fire warrior sux! anyway ill get on reading the storey
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| Sun Jul 15, 2007 11:31 am |
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Kazuki
Joined: Tue Nov 21, 2006 8:09 am
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D Eww, llama cat porn.
No thank you.
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